After our discussion and review of the above presentation, please post 3 thesis statements using the topics from the textbook on page 26 or use one of your own.
1.Having dogs are very important due to the fact they provide companionship, are geat protectors, and are helpful in many ways 2.Cash in today's world is important for survival,a chance to gain more money, and to be a provider in many ways. 3.Joining the military is necessary when it comes to defending your own country,making a strong change with your life, and learning many skills.
1.Gang membership has become a serious threat according to the increased number of fatalities, increased number of kids in juvie and they promote in violence. 2.Children need to be disciplined in order to avoid negative outcomes in their lives, they can learn from their mistakes and they can learn self discipline. 3. Teenagers are becoming corrupted by the day due to their lack of moral values, careless actions, and a decrease in their interest towards education.
1. College has become a big answer to the public trying to achieve a a better life it provides an education, better job opportunities,and connections to many different careers. 2.School Uniforms have been put in effect and it has improved safety among outside intruders, makes the school overall look professional, less waste of money in school clothing throughout the school year. 3.Smoking is a very addicting and deadly substance that cuts down a persons life, makes a smoker live a bipolar lifestyle, and affects the people around him with second hand smoke.
1)The internet has changed the world in cheap communication around the world, helping businesses progress, and also is the foundation of every humans life. 2)immigration has separated parents from children the effects can damage the child's mental health, where will these children stay?, and these children will not have the moral support of the parents. 3)recycling has effected not only our lives but also our planet, money savings, and also the wild life.
1. Drug abuse can cause a person to react differently, it can cause the person to do things that they wouldn't do, and can also cause death. 2. Disciplining children can be done in different ways, one way can be you teach them how to respect others, if they do somethi9ng wrong they should be punished for it. and if the do something good they should be rewarded. 3. Music speaks to me in many ways, one way is that when I listen to music it helps me remember happy, sad and angry memories, I relate to it more then I do with people, and if I had to chose the one I want it will be music.
1. U.S. Marines give & fight for their lives and ours on the battlefield but yet get paid less than what their lives are worth. 2. Football players today get paid the most money to play on the field and entertain the stadium. 3. There are more than six billion people on this planet and the population is just growing.
1. There's many teenagers that have unprotected sex, have no idea what they're doing , and don't take responsibility for their actions. 2 . Parents become physically abusive with their children because of depression, alcoholism , and lack of discipline to their children. 3. Every different religion has different ways to celebrate holidays , different ways to dress and beliefs
1. Several types of music in the world can define your individuality and can have a fond way of expressing your feelings. 2. The video gaming industry has in fact grown gradually throughout the years right when it first started to introduce itself to the people in the world. 3. Social Networking have become another branch in the system of the World Wide Web and have given people a way to meet or catch up with their friends, family, or relatives.
1)There merely aren’t a sufficient amount of hours in a day to administer a school, work, and personal life at the same time, thus is the reason why people have to manage their time to get everything done.
2)Despite the fact that babies are a blessing from above, teen pregnancy has developed enormously within the US because it is being glorified on television shows such as “16 & Pregnant”.
3)The US Military are retracting a large amount of soldiers from Iraq and then moving them right into Afghanistan, at the same time down sizing the Military because the Government is cutting their funding.
1: Having an animal in the house is great fo the fact that they are amazing alarm systems. 2:Music is one of the best ways to express one's feelings abd emotions. 3:The video game industry is actually doing alot more than just making games. Its increasing out knowledge in technology.
1) The television program, Family Guy, can cause an effect on a child’s mental development. 2) Drug abuse have a lot of consequences on someone’s health, but according to statistic’s, drug abuse come from a past cycle. 3) A child should be discipline in a comprehensive matter, or else the child right grow up as a rebel.
1.) A college education is important to obtain because people receive better job opportuities, a resepectable reputation, and most importantly a successful life. 2.) Television shows display a negative message to many viewers due to it's provocative discretion, constant violence, and foul language. 3.) Despite some critiques, technology has benefited society by developing easier ways to perform daily tasks, improving medical supplies, and helping people communicate with each other.
1) Technology has become useful on our life. Everything now day is by computer. You can pay bills, shop online, apply for a job and search for information.
2) Economy on this country is a huge issue because that brings a lot of crime because people would try to get money when there are no jobs.
3) College is a great choice of getting the right knowledge for a better future and to success on life.
1. Disciplining children can be done in several ways. You should definitely teach your kids respect and how to act in public. I'd they do something wrong they should have to face punishment. 2. Hans have become a big problem in America. More and more kids are becoming gang members hurting innocent people or even killing. 3. College education is many of the reasons why people are wealthy in life. People have better chances on getting hired.
Jackie said: 1. Following the rules on wearing school uniform helps out saving kids and parents money, the knowing for all staff and teachers students attend the school, and their number one concern the students safety. 2. We all would like to live longer but you have to stay healthy in order for that, it would help you build self-esteem, and would make you look great on having the figured you always wanted. 3. Drinking and driving is something serious and could cause you and others life, could cause you jail time and could cause you to lose your drives license.
1.Having dogs are very important due to the fact they provide companionship, are geat protectors, and are helpful in many ways
ReplyDelete2.Cash in today's world is important for survival,a chance to gain more money, and to be a provider in many ways.
3.Joining the military is necessary when it comes to defending your own country,making a strong change with your life, and learning many skills.
1.Gang membership has become a serious threat according to the increased number of fatalities, increased number of kids in juvie and they promote in violence.
ReplyDelete2.Children need to be disciplined in order to avoid negative outcomes in their lives, they can learn from their mistakes and they can learn self discipline.
3. Teenagers are becoming corrupted by the day due to their lack of moral values, careless actions, and a decrease in their interest towards education.
1. College has become a big answer to the public trying to achieve a a better life it provides an education, better job opportunities,and connections to many different careers.
ReplyDelete2.School Uniforms have been put in effect and it has improved safety among outside intruders, makes the school overall look professional, less waste of money in school clothing throughout the school year.
3.Smoking is a very addicting and deadly substance that cuts down a persons life, makes a smoker live a bipolar lifestyle, and affects the people around him with second hand smoke.
1)The internet has changed the world in cheap communication around the world, helping businesses progress, and also is the foundation of every humans life.
ReplyDelete2)immigration has separated parents from children the effects can damage the child's mental health, where will these children stay?, and these children will not have the moral support of the parents.
3)recycling has effected not only our lives but also our planet, money savings, and also the wild life.
1. Drug abuse can cause a person to react differently, it can cause the person to do things that they wouldn't do, and can also cause death.
ReplyDelete2. Disciplining children can be done in different ways, one way can be you teach them how to respect others, if they do somethi9ng wrong they should be punished for it. and if the do something good they should be rewarded.
3. Music speaks to me in many ways, one way is that when I listen to music it helps me remember happy, sad and angry memories, I relate to it more then I do with people, and if I had to chose the one I want it will be music.
1. U.S. Marines give & fight for their lives and ours on the battlefield but yet get paid less than what their lives are worth.
ReplyDelete2. Football players today get paid the most money to play on the field and entertain the stadium.
3. There are more than six billion people on this planet and the population is just growing.
1. There's many teenagers that have unprotected sex, have no idea what they're doing , and don't take responsibility for their actions.
ReplyDelete2 . Parents become physically abusive with their children because of depression, alcoholism , and lack of discipline to their children.
3. Every different religion has different ways to celebrate holidays , different ways to dress and beliefs
1. Several types of music in the world can define your individuality and can have a fond way of expressing your feelings.
ReplyDelete2. The video gaming industry has in fact grown gradually throughout the years right when it first started to introduce itself to the people in the world.
3. Social Networking have become another branch in the system of the World Wide Web and have given people a way to meet or catch up with their friends, family, or relatives.
1)There merely aren’t a sufficient amount of hours in a day to administer a school, work, and personal life at the same time, thus is the reason why people have to manage their time to get everything done.
ReplyDelete2)Despite the fact that babies are a blessing from above, teen pregnancy has developed enormously within the US because it is being glorified on television shows such as “16 & Pregnant”.
3)The US Military are retracting a large amount of soldiers from Iraq and then moving them right into Afghanistan, at the same time down sizing the Military because the Government is cutting their funding.
1: Having an animal in the house is great fo the fact that they are amazing alarm systems.
ReplyDelete2:Music is one of the best ways to express one's feelings abd emotions.
3:The video game industry is actually doing alot more than just making games. Its increasing out knowledge in technology.
1) The television program, Family Guy, can cause an effect on a child’s mental development.
ReplyDelete2) Drug abuse have a lot of consequences on someone’s health, but according to statistic’s, drug abuse come from a past cycle.
3) A child should be discipline in a comprehensive matter, or else the child right grow up as a rebel.
1.) A college education is important to obtain because people receive better job opportuities, a resepectable reputation, and most importantly a successful life.
ReplyDelete2.) Television shows display a negative message to many viewers due to it's provocative discretion, constant violence, and foul language.
3.) Despite some critiques, technology has benefited society by developing easier ways to perform daily tasks, improving medical supplies, and helping people communicate with each other.
1) Technology has become useful on our life. Everything now day is by computer. You can pay bills, shop online, apply for a job and search for information.
ReplyDelete2) Economy on this country is a huge issue because that brings a lot of crime because people would try to get money when there are no jobs.
3) College is a great choice of getting the right knowledge for a better future and to success on life.
1. Disciplining children can be done in several ways. You should definitely teach your kids respect and how to act in public. I'd they do something wrong they should have to face punishment.
ReplyDelete2. Hans have become a big problem in America. More and more kids are becoming gang members hurting innocent people or even killing.
3. College education is many of the reasons why people are wealthy in life. People have better chances on getting hired.
Jackie said:
ReplyDelete1. Following the rules on wearing school uniform helps out saving kids and parents money, the knowing for all staff and teachers students attend the school, and their number one concern the students safety.
2. We all would like to live longer but you have to stay healthy in order for that, it would help you build self-esteem, and would make you look great on having the figured you always wanted.
3. Drinking and driving is something serious and could cause you and others life, could cause you jail time and could cause you to lose your drives license.